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[Sonic10: Legacy]

Didnt expect anyone to actually do this

The thing is that Sonic10 is worse than this and Sonic10 dont start going balistic about this, you brought this on yourself.

[Shrimpy's short flash]

Well all right

You really dont want your lines to be seperated from one another, you want everything to be all one straight line. When the girl was standing up we could see how you drew her, you know the ball with the cross in it. Animation wise it was good but you didnt practice anything else such as sounds, colors, background, etc. so you're doing good so far just fix it like the reviewers tell you, practice all the other components of flash and you should be good to go :).

ShrimpyChan responds:

Well, I'm trying to add audio, but I keep messing up...so I'm gonna keep trying until I get it right. about the color and backgrounds...It'll take me pretty much a long time to do that, but for now, it's just sketching. ^^;;

[Sonicc10 Pwning Sk8]

Sonic man,

Okay new lessons
Dont cut out a picture and then put it in the flash you know the clothes and etc., draw it yourself
Dont worry about backgrounds yet despite what others are saying because you should work on your character movement before anything else.
Because Im not sure you're doing this FPS 24
Look for excuses to MOVE the sticks and use it as practice
Now for a leap of faith because Im not sure if the program you're using works like mine, some of this you know and some you don't.
Use the line tool to make a long body for the stick attach two lines to where you want the arms to begin and make them HALF the length of the body, same with the legs. then do another half attachment on the ends of those. Now you have an limbs in two halves each to move like a real human. Now when you click on one part you should get a box around it with 9 smaller boxes that change the size of the line, there should also be a ball in the middle and a line attached to a ball at the edge of the ring of boxes. move the ball in the middle to end of the half and you the ball with the line to move that part of the arm like a real person. NOTE if you move the upper half make sure the lower half is still attached because that's where you screwed up the walk test. Use the circle tool to make a perfect circle for the stick heads, dont use the pencil tool for simple things, use it only for hair or something that HAS to curve a lot, if you can avoid please do.
When moving the stick's limbs move them using 3-6 frames from the time they start to the end point you want them.

Try this for your next flash and actually watch my video "Death or Your Money Back" (Youtube because I messed it up on NG, click the website link on my profile) to get an understanding on how it should look like. If you STILL need help after your next video I'll send you a skate video going step by step but I wont know what else to do after that to help you because I cant go to your house and help you there.

sonic10 responds:

shit up idiot

[fbf random]

Okay for a first

Just make your drawings better and more straight because while the movements were good their bodies were running rampant.

[Naruto Versus Ramen]

Hey thats real good for a first

Not much to it but you got all the basics down pact, sounds were flawless and the animation itself was fluid. Just make some more and we'll all see how you go from there.

[TAP StickWeekly 6]

This was awesome! :D

This was a good animation even though you used sticks because of proper coloring, perspective, and just fluid animation. Good job man :).

[Pirate jokes]

Well that was good for your first

Though it was a bit long for just pirate jokes and eventually you should change the way you're going to have your characters look, make them more realistic you know. Unless you truly want them like that.

[Parody Rangers "Abridged"]

Why are they dressed as ninjas?

Well this is an easy way to get everyone off your back without having to do a lot of work quickly.
COMPLETELY NECESSARY SEX SCENE!!!!!!LOL!

[Leo & Satan]

No, seriously, what the f***

Good Things-Animation Bad Things- Everything else
This looks like you made this series because you literally had nothing better to do and as of now your bag of flash tricks is empty. The only jokes you had was the change moments, the cursing, and the way they talked. The way they talked was annoying and kinda shows despertaion for laughs and you relied far too heavily on the change moments, the cursing would have been funny but the way the characters talked killed it.
To be honest I think the only reason this animation is as popular as it is because it was made by you.

[Naruto fight 2010]

Great Darwings!

But they didnt really do anything, sorry but its lazy. :(